[Group 9] Telomere length is reflected by plumage coloration in barn swallow

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70 Responses to [Group 9] Telomere length is reflected by plumage coloration in barn swallow

  1. Abigail says:

    Your audio bits overlap sometimes, creating confusion, but the visuals are great.

  2. Carson says:

    The visuals were very clear and informative

  3. Sarah says:

    I enjoyed the visuals. The video was laid out well and looked professional.

  4. John says:

    The table and visuals were supportive of your video.

  5. Matthew says:

    Visuals are good, although the figure is cut off on the bottom a bit. The explanation and simplifying of the study is very good, but the video is a bit bland and could be more entertaining. Well done though!

  6. Savannah says:

    This video is very well put together. I liked how informative this video is. Good job!

  7. Madison says:

    Very informative video!

  8. Nylah says:

    The video wasn’t as interactive/”creative” as I hoped it would be, but it was professional and informative! Also in the middle the two voice-overs clashed into each other (Idk if this was technical error through youtube or not)

  9. Amanda says:

    I liked how clean and straight-forward the visuals were!

  10. Faye says:

    It might have been good to include more visuals in your results section to make the findings more clear, but overall good pace and good job at describing the paper!

  11. Kayla says:

    The voice over made it hard to understand the last parts of the descriptions. I liked the pictures you used because they were clear and easily understood.

  12. Patrick says:

    The audio was a bit spotty at times, but overall the video was very informative and well put together.

  13. Blake says:

    I thought you did a good job of summarizing the study as a whole and tying in some information from other studies as well. That gave it good context and brought it out from behind the curtain of just another study. However, the editing could use work on this video. The audio overlapped and there were some figures that were cut off. Overall good job.

  14. Soham says:

    The video was good, however, the audio was slightly lacking in the sense that there was overlap, and some of the figures were a bit cutoff. However, there was a good summary of the research article.

  15. Alyssa says:

    Excellent job with effectively summarizing the experiment, including solely important/relevant information and being able to present it in a way that’s understandable to the audience. Great connections made to what we’ve learned in class. Overlap in audio in beginning but otherwise, well done!

  16. Daham says:

    The contents are well organized

  17. Amanda says:

    I really enjoyed your visuals, they made the video look very professional

  18. Sean says:

    all-in-all, good video. Editing could use some work though
    good job!

  19. Hanna says:

    The video overall looked very traditional and professional and the narration was smooth, except for a couple overlaps.

  20. James says:

    I liked the audio…

  21. Pratima says:

    With its layout and voiceovers, the video appeared to be very professional. You guys also explained the experiment well!

  22. Lindsay says:

    The video was very neat and professional. The audio had a few overlap errors, but the speaking was clear and slow-paced so I was able to easily understand what was being said.

  23. Kaitlyn says:

    The video was well done. Very clear visuals but the audio overlap and switching of narrators made the audio quality not the best in the middle/end of the video.

  24. Ansley says:

    The video is very professional looking. I also like the content, but I think you could have been a little more creative.

  25. Jessica says:

    Visuals accurately portrayed what you were saying allowing for both visual and auditory learning which was good.

  26. Arfa says:

    The video looked very professional and well made, especially through the visuals although having more visuals in the results section would have been nicer. The information was also presented clearly.

  27. Maxwell says:

    The video was very professional and informative, but it could’ve been a bit more interesting with dynamic visuals or other techniques.

  28. Lily says:

    Great information, but the editing could have been better. The pictures of the birds were really cool

  29. Irene says:

    The video is very professional and have very clear visuals. The information was easy to understand and transitioned smoothly. However, the audio overlapped and needed a little work.

  30. Ayomikun says:

    I like the professional quality of the video. I also like that there were pictures for the instruments and animals

  31. Andrea says:

    The presentation was very clear, organized and professional

  32. Justin says:

    Very informative video. I like the organization and variety of voices in this video.

  33. Tarab says:

    The information is presented super well and in a mature, educated manner.

  34. Ashmita says:

    The visuals (which are great) lead to a put-together video.

  35. Ashna says:

    The visuals added a professional feel to the video, and made the content easy to understand.

  36. Nidhi says:

    The visuals were very easy to follow which helped make the content understandable and not boring.

  37. Joselyn says:

    The video looked very professional and the information was presented in a very cohesive manner!

  38. Elizabeth says:

    This was my groups topic as well and you guys did a great job presenting the information

  39. Bencao says:

    I loved the video. It has really great visuals. great work!

  40. James says:

    The voices overlapped at times but it wasn’t that bad. The visuals really add onto the audio presentation.

  41. Gracelyn says:

    This is really professional-looking! The visuals of the video were very pertinent to the information and are really informative, and the audio overlap isn’t bad at all. Really well done :))

  42. Joy says:

    I like how each group member was able to contribute to the narration of the video. The explanations were clear and simple, very easy to follow along with the concepts that were mentioned.

  43. Mirali says:

    It would have been nice to see more visuals that are directly related to the article, but overall the information presented is easy to follow.

  44. Zachery says:

    The information was good but lost my attention a few times.

  45. Katherine says:

    The video is good and explains everything well; however, it does not grasp the attention of the audience extremely well. The voiceovers also overlap a bit and you can’t understand what each person is saying very well.

  46. Daniel says:

    Interesting use of digital media (PowerPoint) to present the study. Excellent choice given the complexity of the charts and graphs.

  47. Isabelle says:

    Visuals were very well done. However, audio was overlapped at points making the explanation confusing.

  48. Griffin says:

    I like the use of powerpoint. Its a nice change of pace. You guys also use some really good analogies that help with your explanations. The audio overlaps sometimes, but its nothing unbearable.

  49. Noah says:

    I don’t think the overlapping audio subtracts as much as others are suggesting. The information was also neatly presented and simplified just enough to make it easy to understand.

  50. Jingyi says:

    The presentation of this video is great and it is more like a powerpoint presentation than a video. The overlapping audio is not distracting but it can be improved in the future.

  51. Joseph says:

    I do not want to seem picky, but instead of repeatedly saying telomere you could have used a pronoun to save time. On the other hand, repeating the word did force me to know what a telomere is and what it does, for example telomere is like an aglet on a shoe.

  52. Seenam says:

    Really good video with info & a lot of understanding, The audio overlapped a little bit but still a good video!

  53. William says:

    The video was very informative, but the audio was out of place in a couple of spots. Visuals made up for any errors in audio however.

  54. Brooklyn says:

    The video clearly explained the concepts from the article, but the execution could have used a little more work. There was a moment or two of audio confusion that could have been better clarified in captioning. As a whole, however, the visuals were colorful, and the video was very informative.

  55. Eric says:

    The video was very organized with the graphs and other visuals.

  56. Maxwell says:

    This video looks and sounds professional.

  57. Pooja says:

    Your video is very informative and easy to follow; I like the visuals you used.

  58. Pooja says:

    Your video is very informative and easy to follow; I like the visuals you used to relay the information.

  59. Carlos says:

    I like that some concepts were clearly explained using effective analogies such as the telomere-shoelace analogy. Presentation format is professional but not too captivating.

  60. Govinda says:

    Wow! Very professional presentation of the topic, yet easy enough to be understood by anyone. Great job.

  61. Victoria says:

    Good job with defining the key terms and typing the study into what we’ve learned in class. The only improvement I’d suggest is to make the audio transitions more clear. But overall it was great!

  62. Darrell says:

    Your video was really creative. I thought you did a good job tying in information from class, and your narrator did a good job explaining the topic in an easy way.

  63. Collin says:

    The information presented was well placed but there could have been more interesting aspects to attract the viewer.

  64. Katherine says:

    Great amount of information! It was in-depth and well presented!

  65. Vamsish says:

    I thought the information was presented well. However, the audio overlapped at times, and the video was kind of dry.

  66. Vamsish says:

    I thought the information was presented well. However, the audio overlapped at times, and the video was very dull.

  67. Luis says:

    Visuals were good, although a bit plain at times, but great content!

  68. Ana says:

    The visuals and audios are so great! One of my favorites. However, I think it would have been helpful to bring in some background about the birds to hook in the audience. I liked the simile you used to explain telomeres!

  69. Andrew says:

    I like how you explain in great detail what a telomere is and refer to what we learned in class. It made the process of understanding the concept very easy.

  70. Naqiya says:

    The video you made was clear and concise making it a good informative video. The visuals enhanced your information. The only thing you could have fixed would be the error in the voiceover, other than that you did a great job!

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